Hello!!
I take this photography 3 years ago, in October I think, and I like it because you can see all the colours in a cloud. Some people say the clouds are white, but it prove this isn’t true. Also, it semes like a big cotton, soft and smooth.
In the moment I took this photography I used it to send a message.this cloud have a significance... a importance. I took it when the day begin to get dark in a place near to my house. The tree next to the cloud is a walnut tree and I like his figure. I like the sunset reflected in it.
All the photography have a essence a little dark, like it would be painted whit oil. The light in the cloud’s top vanish near to the house’s roof.
Well, I will be glad if you look my photography and agree whit me, but specialy if you enjoy it.
In the moment I took this photography I used it to send a message.this cloud have a significance... a importance. I took it when the day begin to get dark in a place near to my house. The tree next to the cloud is a walnut tree and I like his figure. I like the sunset reflected in it.
All the photography have a essence a little dark, like it would be painted whit oil. The light in the cloud’s top vanish near to the house’s roof.
Well, I will be glad if you look my photography and agree whit me, but specialy if you enjoy it.
Hi! I think the picture you uploaded it's very beautiful, and it's great you have taken it.
ResponderEliminarNow I'll do some corrections to your post:
I think you should say "took" instead of "take" because you are talking about past, so you must use a past tense.
On the line you say "but it prove this...", I would put it like this " but that proves this..". I think it sounds better.
Now I'll do some little corrections using your own words:
In the moment I took this photography I USED it to send a message.this cloud have a significance... AN importance. I took it when the day BEGAN to get dark in a place near to my house. The tree next to the cloud is a walnut tree and I like IT'S figure. I like the sunset reflected in it.
I liked very much your description about the cloud :) well that's all see you in class!
Melinka,
ResponderEliminarI absolutely agree with you, it’s a nice photograph and it really proves that not all clouds are white.
Please have a look at the excellent comment done by Comfortably Numb and the corrections in and below the post here:
I take this photography 3 years ago, in October I think, and I like it because you can see all the colours in a cloud. Some people say the clouds are white, but it prove this isn’t true. Also, it seEms like a big cotton BALL, soft and smooth.
AT the moment I took this photograph(-) I used it to send a message. This cloud have a significance... aN importance. I took it when the day begin to get dark in a place near (-) my house. The tree next to the cloud is a walnut tree and I like his figure. I like the sunset reflected in it.
All the photograph(-) have a essence a little dark, AS IF IT HAD BEEN painted whit oil. The light ON the cloud’s top vanishES near (-) the house’s roof / THE ROOF OF THE HOUSE.
Well, I will be glad if you look ATmy photograph(-) and agree whit me, but specialy if you enjoy it.
Study these corrections, please,
I take this photography 3 years ago: TOOK
but it prove: PROVES
This cloud have: HAS
when the day begin: BEGAN
...tree and I like his figure: ITS FIGURE